Your game starts at 07:34.19 and I critique it at the end at 17:45.39
I do like the style almost like a paper crafted style with all the different images almost pasted together to create a cohesive scene, however I should say if you would like to use chinese in your game to make it seem that your character is there, make it so people who don't speak chinese can read whatever it's on or whoever is speaking it if you intend to add other characters in the future, or whatever items may use it as lore or descriptions if you intent to add those in the future as well, of course that is if it's important, even if not, flavor text is always good. I don't know if that sign in the Tunnel, or Sewers whatever the starting area was is important, but if I was I would like to have been able to read it, with a popup or something when I walked by it; also I'm not sure if it was indeed just 2 screens or I was missing something; and finally I needed more substance to the demo, to make me care about the character I was playing; but otherwise decent demo.
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bitch this is fucking good-
im not lying
I played your game in my 3 Games series on Odysee the link is:
https://odysee.com/@Kaiju_Raptor:a/3G_Ep_14:a
Your game starts at 07:34.19 and I critique it at the end at 17:45.39
I do like the style almost like a paper crafted style with all the different images almost pasted together to create a cohesive scene, however I should say if you would like to use chinese in your game to make it seem that your character is there, make it so people who don't speak chinese can read whatever it's on or whoever is speaking it if you intend to add other characters in the future, or whatever items may use it as lore or descriptions if you intent to add those in the future as well, of course that is if it's important, even if not, flavor text is always good. I don't know if that sign in the Tunnel, or Sewers whatever the starting area was is important, but if I was I would like to have been able to read it, with a popup or something when I walked by it; also I'm not sure if it was indeed just 2 screens or I was missing something; and finally I needed more substance to the demo, to make me care about the character I was playing; but otherwise decent demo.
I'm looking forward to the full version of the game.
I have my gameplay included in this video
This game has a lot of potential! Hope to see the full version! It is featured in my Top 5 for this week!
You may take a look at the video!
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cool very short